First Cut

So here is my first cut for my opening 2 minutes of a film. It has not got all the features I want it to at the moment and there's a lot that I have got to edit.

I struggled to change the transition times to the times that I would've preferred, for example the transitions between the photo's is too fast, so for my second cut I would like to have changed these.

I also had some problems with the voice recordings, meaning I was unable to add voice recording to accompany the photos at the beginning for my first cut, which is something I will change for my final cut.

There were also transitions with music that were sloppy, which is again something else I would change for my final cut.

However, what I did like about my first cut is that I feel it was effective within the genre I had chosen and gives the sense of a tragedy by the music I used and I am also happy with the choice of shots I've made.

I am hoping to make these improvements which will hopefully result in a successful final cut.